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Good Ending – Family –

Conditions to Unlock:

1) Instead of Burying, Carry Redhoof Ashes during the rest of the game
2) Beat the Game with all pages of the Book of Ancient Songs of Harmony
3) Select Laughter Element
4) During Skeletal Mare battle, beat her using only magic
5) When in control of Skeletal Mare, Kill 25 Monsters, including Shadow Performers or Armored Shadows, without letting a single one touch Stormy  

Rewards:

- New Item: Skeletal Mare Wing Bone
- New Item: Manehatten Police Dept Key
- New Item: Vinyl Scratch Glasses
- New Item: Octavia Chello Bow
- New Item: Redhoof House Key
- New Item: Love Medallion
- Alternative Costume Stormy = Manehatten Civilian Clothes
- Alternative Costume Luna = Gamer Luna Headset
- Alternative Costume Mistshine = Engineer Overalls
- Alternative Costume Redhoof = Bunny Hood
- Unlockable Weapon Stormy/Luna = Manehatten Police Stun Gun
- Unlockable Weapon Stormy/Luna = Death Scythe (*)


=== Before Skeletal Mare dying by Iron Mask Pony ====

Skeletal Mare dropped her scythe… having successfully protected Stormy, Iron Mask was only left with himself to attack her; she knew she was going to die, but she will at least take Stormy to safety before doing so, so she concentrated her bones, and made Stormy float until he exited the room he was, by the same hole he fallen in… after that… only a distorted scream was heard, Stormy woke up on the hallway… but noticed the bones next to him, protecting him, until they became dust, Stormy smiled… as he let only a few words…

“Sunnybreeze…. You protected me again… even if I didn´t asked for it… I swear I will get you back

Stormy saw a new saddlebags, and Luna letter… asking for his forgiveness, he smiled as he gathered all his items… plus a little Zap Apple Pie slice next to the bag.


=== Up to this point, everything else plays the same as in the Cannon Ending, after Mistshine wakes up, his special cutscene is displayed ===


After just a couple of weeks of their ordeal, Stormy decided to give his moondust magic a test, using the most powerful song available in his disposal… the Song of Time, he was willing to make time itself go backwards, erase his past… or part of it anyways… he had dominated every song on the book, including those ones with corruption, however, those ones were close supervised by both princesses themselves, to make sure Stormy kind soul wouldn’t get polluted with the corruption and chaos that the dangerous songs give as a side effect, his brother were actually next to him this time, Luna decided to stay in the castle, since she and Celestia had royal business to attend and Twilight was busy with her friends, Stormy was ready, as he focused on the song…. He was in the middle of the Manehatten Graveyard, to be more precise, on Sunnybreeze grave, Mistshine was carrying a little urn… that had ashes on it, Stormy was attempting to turn back time at full degree, until Redhoof ashes turned back to her body, and same thing with her Sister, he was trying to bring them back to life. He asked Mistshine to be at his side, since the song would affect anypony not close to him, he would try to use the song effects on only the urn and the grave.

He started playing the song… and as expected, the urn levitated, starting to get filled with his own moondust magic, the dust started to combine with both, Sunnybreeze and Redhoof ashes… they formed the silhouette of 2 earth ponies, but just as the spell started to form the bodies, the silhouette combined into a singular round object, a medallion, the song of time and his moondust magic was cut short, sending him and Mistshine against one of the graves, Stormy reacted in time, and created 2 moondust cushions to prevent the fall and damage, Stormy got up, and his brother also got up

“What happened brother?... didn’t you used the same song you used to wake me up? “ Mistshine questioned, even if his appearance was of a grown up colt, his mind is still of a foal, it will take a while for him to adjust

“no… it was different, your body was still here, in our sister and Redhoof case, their bodies are already gone… I needed to remake them…. But “ Stormy said as he grew closer to the medallion

“….but no magic can bring back the dead! “ Stormy cried, having failed his revival attempt

He cried on the medallion, his brother came closer to him, sadden to see him like this, however, both found a little surprise on that medallion, as the warm tears of the unicorn felt on it, both ponies felt as if their souls were taken out from their bodies, however, all the light they saw were pure white, they found themselves on a special place, high above the clouds… or that is what it seems, when they looked down, they saw they were still in the Graveyard, however, there was a fog surrounding them… Stormy went to defensive mode, and prepared for a encounter, perhaps traumatized for what he endured a couple of weeks ago… however, as he and Mistshine saw 2 ponies approach them, they smiled, they were Sunnybreeze and Redhoof, both of them had their clothes when they died, but they appearance was ok, no scars, no blood, no wounds.

The family was together, Stormy and Mistshine jumped and hugged their sister, Redhoof with a kind of annoyed look, also hugged Stormy, a little jealous that he didn’t hug her first, it was a warm reunion… Stormy felt that he did the impossible, that he did bring them back to life… that is until Sunnybreeze talked to them, she looked happy, but also a little sad

“You shouldn’t have done that brother… nopony return from the grave and you know it” she said

“Im Sorry sis… but I actually wanted you to see something…Mistshine… he is ok “ Stormy said proudly, as he knew his bro would get better by seeing this

“H-hi sis….i-is it really you? “ Mistshine said a little afraid, behind is big brother back hooves “

“Mistshine!, you are ok!” Sunnybreeze exploded in happiness

“At least he got saved… it was really close honey” Redhoof talked now, still showing care for Stormy

“Yeah… but I couldn’t save you or my sister Redhoof” Stormy said, with a little remorse

“And do I look like I hate you for that? “ Redhoof said as she hugged the colt she loved again “ no…I do not… in fact, I missed you”

“Redhoof” Stormy said smiling

“and I missed messing with you hehe” she said as she put Stormy hoof on her hindquarters

“Redhoof!!! “ Stormy stepped away with a heavy blush

“Come on, I remember that you loved it when I placed these babies in your muzzle teehee” Redhoof continued, pushing the teasing to a further level

“ yeah… you haven’t changed a bit, but… how is that we are seeing this? “ Stormy questioned, more blushed than usual

“ Is because both of you are dead “ Sunnybreeze said, smiling evil as she picked up a scythe

“Oh honey… I got a excellent prison for your soul…is a little wet and tight “ Redhoof said, smiling lustfully as she pulled out a dagger

“AAAH!!! “Mistshine and Stormy screamed

“ Just joking hehehe “ Both mare disappeared their weapons, that turned into clouds

“Not Funny girls!” both colts said, Stormy blushing hard, catching Redhoof taunt

“All jokes aside honey… what really happened, is that no matter how hard you want us back… our souls are long gone, here, is where we are supposed to be “ Redhoof continue

“So… we are in heaven?” Mistshine replied, confused

“No little brother… this is a limbo… a link between the other side and your side.. your older brother trying to revive us, opened a way for us to contact you and stop him before he could complete the spell “ Sunnybreeze explain

“But why sis?, why you and Redhoof can’t be back with us? “ Stormy questioned they loved ones decision

“Because our time already ended…” She replied

“NO! it has not!, your time was stolen!, stole by that traitor son of a hoof that nopony gives a flying feather about him! “Stormy replied in anger

“ and yet… we are happy with our time Stormy… when we died, we though that nopony will ever remember us… and here you two are, we are always going to live with you… but in your heart “ Sunnybreeze said, as she hugged his two brothers

“how?... how can you be so happy you two girls? “ Stormy questioned

“I could have used the company when I was in coma sis…” Mistshine replied, being aware of his coma state before

“We are happy because even after what happened, you didn’t seek revenge against Blackhorn, you let the fate take care of him, sooner or later he will face his sins, but not by your hoof, you are not like him, and im proud of what you have done, not Everypony is Luna personal royal guard” Sunnybreeze say with pride in her voice

“Hold up, Luna herself has my colt for herself?! “ Redhoof said jealous

“He is no longer your colt remember?, besides… if I recall correctly, you almost…” Sunnybreeze continued, recalling something

“ Don’t say it! Mistshine is present! “ Redhoof put her hoof on Sunnybreeze mouth, to shut her up

“Awkward” Both colts said…

It was like if they never left, they talked for a while until Stormy understood why they love ones didn’t want to be back among the living, there is a law, a celestial law, once a pony dies, they cannot be back among the living, unless they have pending business, something that kept them liked to the living world, When Redhoof died, she manage to tell the truth before dying, even in a remorse letter, that it was later mistaken as a motive for her killing, and Sunnybreeze manage to catch enough suspicion on the mayor son when she was alive, that Stormy only had to connect the dots, however, the police didn’t believe him, when Blackhorn was arrested and brought to justice, their souls could finally rest in peace… they later explained the medallion was form, from Stormy desire to revive his loved ones, but also, is made from their ashes, and it will act as a protective device, protecting anypony that is important to him, he was sad that he couldn’t bring their love ones to life, but if that was the case, Luna might have already returned her parents, and yet, neither her or Celestia had, or Applejack would also asked Twilight to revive them to help her in the farm, after a warm hug, Stormy and Mistshine started to notice that Redhoof and Sunnybreeze were disappearing, stepping away… Mistshine jumped to his brother back, as they tried to catch them, but they were not moving from their place, until they heard one last word from her big sister

“Life your life my brothers… we may see each other… when the time is right “

Both ponies returned to the graveyard, Stormy was still holding the medallion, as his brother noticed something on his cheek, a lipstick mark

“brother…what is that? “ Mistshine asked

“… a reminder… a reminder that we are not alone… even if the mark fades… they are still with us, in our hearts…” Stormy replied

Both ponies with a smile, walked away from Manehatten Graveyard… in the grave, a new carving was grabbed, it reads “ here lies Sunnybreeze Brave and Redhoof Goldenscroll, loved sister and marefriend, taken away from us, but alive in our memories and hearts “ as the 2 mares watched them, before returning to the other side.
Title says it all, this is the Non-Cannon Good ending if you completed the game under the specific requierements, this is the only ending where we get to see Redhoof and Sunnybreeze interacting with Stormy and Mistshine, and, as you can tell, Redhoof was more lustful than Luna, thanks a lot Deep Ambition Amulet

Items Descriptions:

* Skeletal Mare Wing Bone: a bone from the " Death " like creature that is following me... seems that missing a bone wont affect her at all.... i can feel a certain power within it...
Item Function: Allow user to fly more higher but deplets Magic quickly

* Manehatten Police Deparment Key:  Key to the Police Dept back home... my sis always carried it...
Item Funtion: Allow access to the Police Deparment, in order to get the Stun gun

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Vinyl Scratch Glasses: Vinyl Glasses... they are in perfect state, and are sound proof
Item Function: allow faster magic regen, and replaces magic blast with Bass Cannon Blast

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Octavia Chello Bow: Bow that Octavia uses for her chello, is very neat and clean
Item Funtion: Allow user to use the Quick Knockout spell, that puts monsters to sleep, but it doesnt work agains Shadow monsters

* Redhoof House Key: my ex marefriend house key... i remember she used to let me in in secret so we could play and talk... but i never understood why she always teased me...
Item Funtion: Allow user to enter Redhoof home, to obtain more apples, including a Zap apple and the perfume bottle ( If player unlocks DLC Bad ending first, perfume can be found on Mayor Office )

* Love Medallion: A Medallion filled with the love of those i care about... had the cutie marks of Sunnybreeze and Redhoof on each side....strange, i do not feel alone wearing it...
Item Funtion: Allow higher magic regen plus a powerful protective barrier, you will take less damage per attack!

(*) Death Scythe: Skeletal Mare Scythe...i better be careful... this thing packs a punch, but i really do not feel confortable near it...but is better than nothing
Weapon Funtion: The most powerful weapon, can instant kill normal enemies... but slowly drains user life energy




Endings Guide

Cannon Ending - fav.me/d78yse5 -
Good Ending - You are Here -
Bad Ending  - fav.me/d7jrggt -
Bad Ending + - fav.me/d7jrjqk -
UFO Ending - fav.me/d7jre63 -
Game Over - fav.me/d7bwx8y -

DLC Guide

DLC Boss Cutscene: Pinkamena Diane Pie - fav.me/d7c1yoe -
DLC Ending 1: Swift Justice, Tender as a Cupcake - fav.me/d7c1t8s -
DLC Sidequest: Flutterbat - fav.me/d7c422z -


Inspired by :iconjake-heritagu:
MLP and all it’s related characters belong to Hasbro
Stormy and Oc´s featured on this fic belongs to me
Silent Ponyville belong to :iconjake-heritagu:
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